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Submitted: November 11, 2009
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all i ever wantedby ~burdge-bug

Traditional Art / Drawings / Fantasy

there's kind of a story behind this, but
i don't even know how to put it. the sea and the
sky are simply in love. and when there's a storm,
they crash together.

Oh, all I ever wanted was to see you smiling,
All I ever wanted was to make you mine.
I know that I love you, oh baby why don't you see
That all I ever wanted was you and me?
Basshunter

Critique by ~allybacon Oct 26, 2012, 4:36:30 PM

WOW! this made quite an impact on me! I love the concept of the ocean and the sky...pure forbidden love! I can really read the emotions on the faces, and I think that your idea was a VERY good one! But, as this is a critique, I have to tell you about some things you could have done better. The colors of the man and the sea should have been a little more blended. Putting a little more darker blue fading around the torso would've helped this. On the sky, I loved how you wrapped the clouds around her arms like a sleeve, however, you could have added to the 'cloud clothes' a little more draping. I love the people in the drawing, but the background behind them could use some work. You could have put some stray tiny clouds, a little more blending of the blue, or some more layered different blues. Overall, I loved it! Great artwork!
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Critique by !Angry-Hippo Feb 6, 2012, 2:43:30 PM

Just letting you know I haven't written any critique before and I might come across as being a bit harsh or something. I don't mean any offense and I love the drawing, just letting you know. Anyways, overall I think this is an amazing drawing! It has a lot of depth and emotion, and is very appealing to the eye. The anatomy is correct as far as I can see, and the idea of the sky and the sea in love is very interesting.

There are, however, a few minor things that could be improved or fixed, as far as I'm concerned. For one, you mentioned that when there was a storm, they crash together. Maybe you could make the thing look a bit more stormy, then? Like dark clouds around the edges and a rough sea of something? Also, while I like the idea of the guy's hand turning lighter as he touches the girl and vice versa, I think it could be a bit more... artfully placed, or something. Like, to me, it seems strange that his hand turns lighter when touching her arm that's turning darker. Maybe he could touch her hair, or her face, or something. Another thing is that while their expression looks loving, the way they're positioned, it kind of looks like he's dragging her down. Maybe they could both have their arms around eachother of something?

Anyways, I really like it and thought it was a gorgeous piece of work. Everything from their expressions to the background is detailed and beautiful. Keep drawing! ^-^

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~tristauu May 10, 2013 New member

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~dinah-demetria Feb 24, 2013

sorry that was my friend, but he loves your work and so do i

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~Flygurl97 Dec 31, 2012

The song and this picture don't match up very well. I mean, this picture is GORGEOUS and I like the song enough to not delete it off my mp3 player, but it's a happy song, and this picture just seems kinda sad.
Also, this is pretty much the theme song of a character I don't like at all.